News critique

News critique

By: John Constantine

          I think that our TV production class can improve on some things while doing the news.  A couple things that we can improve as a class are: more communication, better camera work, better transitions, maybe even better articles and we could approach the weather differently.  These are all ways we could improve our news cast.  We needed to have better communication last news cast because there was a couple times when someone would be reading and they would not be looking at the right camera and when we told them to look at the other one while they were reading they got confused and stopped.  That threw off the entire news cast.  We could work on camera work because they were a couple times when someone’s elbow would be showing while we would be filming someone else.  Transitions could be better, for example when we are done filming the weather sometimes Abby fades out when we already started to film the news again.  We could also do more interesting articles some of the articles now are bland and boring.  And last the weather could be different cause now it is awkward and dull so we could make it more fun.  Overall I thought this was an ok news cast we still have to work on a couple of things to make it better.